A few point about your video, I would have added some more details to the title sequence, at the moment it's just a single word floating on a black background, you should have put your name or Nel Productions on at the start aswell or a combination of all the words. At 0.53 there is a very dark shot and I can't make out what it's supposed to be, there are a few other strange dark shots with grey bits running along the bottom of the screen throughout the video and they need to be taken out as they add nothing to the narrative and just confuse the viewer. The sound goes very low at 2.29 and again at 3.07 when the other girl goes to look for her friend. Reasonably good cutting on action, the effect you used was well done, although I would have preferred to have seen the girl on the floor with a half eaten head, as time had passed since the 'creatures' invaded her body.

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