Hello people,

This is my first piece, and at 29 seconds it's a whopper! It wasn't easy to convince my girlfriend to do this, so I hope ye like it.. Again, I'm pretty new to this and work in a bistro making pizza, would love to get feedback to improve.

YouTube - Scorpop

Cast: Kim Conway
Script: Kim Conway and me
Music: Paddyrasta (MySpace.com - Paddyrasta - Ireland & Aberdeen, UK - Reggae / Celtic / Ska - www.myspace.com/paddyrasta)


If you get the urge to click 5 red stars, then by all means go right ahead. Some of the other entrants in this competition are quite funny (too?).