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Originally Posted by Przytula  I really didn't have a clue what I was doing and just went with what I thought looked good. |
It certainly looked good to me, too and I wouldn't have had a clue you didn't have a clue.
The quarter-face B/W immediately draws attention and the line "You don't know me" just adds to that. But you only have a very short time to work with so you immediately give clues (no time for the audience to get fed up guessing - it all works in your favour). I agree with SSSekuence, the lawyer, mother, waitress, student line and accompanying shots is a great idea. As is the sign of "but maybe one day you will".
Personally I think it needs a pause there for impact - maybe leave the visuals but cut the v/o until "Cardrunners dot com. What's your edge"
If I'm really picky, the drink can representing endorsement deal didn't look convincing - even as a graphic (the text towards the bottom of the can needed some perspective).
Great ad. Hope you win - I'd love to see anything that beats it.