Afraid I'm not technically competent enough to offer any really useful critisism. (Guru's lighting comments... Went right past me. It looked gorgeous to me)
The shot from outside the bedroom door ... I am sure there is a shadow of the camera operator or something. Particularly at 05:27 I'm sure you can see a moving shadow.
Well and convincingly acted. Liked the script too, particularly the subtext about her past.
I only caught a whiff of a French accent. But I work with French people every day so it's hard not to get atuned to it. However it just made the female character a tad more exotic.
Last line... Right out of 'Eyes Wide Shut'? Still a good line though