N5...

You have come onto a video makers forum and offered up your work for criticism. This assumes that you want something from us. Firstly, it would be polite to make the effort to communicate with us on our level.

wi shud i mak the F-ort 2 C ur vid wen u cant be R-sed 2 rite coherently?

You want comments... well "Images have a rhythm, as does music and the rhythm of your cutting doesn't fit with the music " is quite easy to understand. You haven't taken the visual rhythm into account. You've cut images off beat, you've mixed image durations out of relationship with the music and it looks like you worked on the principle of "I've got three minutes music, I'll put clips together until the music's covered... Then I'll stop".

That's not editing, that's bricklaying images together. No skill in that.

In other words, you haven't shown any editing skill. You may have shown propagandist skill and we've got the message that you're pro muslim but, this isn't a religeous website, it's a videomaking website and all I'm interested in is your videomaking.
There's no need to get stroppy just because we haven't praised your work.