There were too many scene transition effect, wipes etc, that were distracting.
The slow motion and stop motion effects were good though. And conventional fades I like.
I think there should've been a change or break in the music when the credits came up at the end, just to mark the difference. Not quite sure what. Maybe a sudden slight drop in volume, or a fade out of the power part of the song, and fade in a quieter instrumental part at a more background level.

Having said all that, it is very watchable interesting and entertaining.
I enjoyed the video and the music.
Good work.

Tony