Yup, shoot the Stills Photographer.

No sound for me on this clip I am afraid, but that aside,

Nicely photographed I thought, although I found the constant Fade to/from black very disconcerting and visually annoying after the first couple of fades.

Did you have a second camera on this? The edit would have benefited greatly with cuts from another angle.

But without the sound it is very difficult to comment.

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