Love the song and the opening of the video. The rest of the video . . . Not good at all.
After the 1st major beat change it should cut to some meaningful, but still B&W arty shots. This would lift it and cutting back to your face would be the reminder of your misery.
Just my opinion FWIW.
The trouble is, like most videos, they can be filmed and edited lazy, or you can devote every waking hour for months tweaking the life outa them.

Me, I like simple, but thought provoking and black and white is always more evocative and moody.
Just choose your scenes carefully, but keep em simple.