I'm sorry but...

It falls down on a number of points. I'll only hit you with three, to avoid a backlash.

The locations are okay...ish. Nothing which makes you go "wow" or "cool". Also, I'm sure that the dancer was unimpressed at having to dance on soft ground and grass and it shows in her movements.
The framing and composistion wasn't particularly inspiring and didn't show off the movements at all well.
The music is,,, how can I put this... Boring.

On a positive note, it's good technically, sharp and the camera movements are solid, although not particularly innovative. I suggest that you have a look at something like "Dance Rocks" to get an idea of how a contemporary dance video can look.