Thanks for your constructive comments Zero and MOSH.

I have to agree with your feedback. Unfortunately, the shoot had a lot of problems and also I wasn't around to do the the pickup shots and the guy did not set white balance or lighting properly. The red light on the curtains was done on purpose for the silhouette shadow fight scene. Maybe it did not work.

The director wanted to go into Black and White as a homage to Natural Born Killers, as there is a B/W scene of a spinning cleaver shot there.

I had already cut out a lot of stuff that the director wanted in, but maybe I should have been even more brutal on the edit. He himself thinks its far below what he originally planned, but I think it could have ended up much worse.