Yeah I have to agree with zero there. It was a bit slow.
Also the toast didn't seem to toast in the toaster, but magically did so in the blokes hand after he'd started eating it?!!?

I don't get the jump to black and white... why not make the whole thing black and white, as it looked much better than it did in colour. (Red light bleeding through the curtains, and white balance shifts on close up shots)

And a meat cleaver for chopping tomatoes?

A good effort though, but there are quite a few bits I would change in the shoot and post.