Alright, here's the constructive criticism bit:

First of all, some of the shots were really really great. A few that come to mind were the airport screens (especially the second one) and the big moving, uh, side scrolling, architecture looking thing.. well, it was big and tan and sidescrolling near the end. No idea what it was, but I loved it. Oh, and I really, really liked the music choice. What song/artist was that?

Criticism: A few of the scenes were pretty bland, or were held for too long. The opening cloud scene was especially too long for an opening scene, especially because it was shakey, you know? Had I just stumbled acrossed your video, I probably would have stopped watching at that point. I don't mean to be too harsh here, just trying to share some of the feedback I've received on my similar works. Next time, keep the scenes short and purposeful - the night traffic, for instance, felt like filler to me.

Hope you appreciate the feedback, I know it can be hard to get. Once again, over all, you did a great job, and I would watch it again. Keep it up!!!