Personally i'd cut out the shots of madelyn crying. No-one likes to watch a crying baby.

Having said that, these types of video are very personal and subjective, so asking other people what they think will normally end up in big arguments along the lines of "this shot is poorly lit, the camera work is rubbish...etc" Vs. "..but it's the only shot of my baby's first steps, so i'm leaving it in"

I'm sure no-one would appreciate the tribute video I made to friends who have passed away quite so much as myself and those who knew them. Likewise with videos of new born children. Your family will love them, but joe bloggs will get borred of them unless you drasticly cut down the length of the clips and get rid of all the shaky camera work.