I did llike the look of the clip, some of the effects you used were givin it an extra touch but sometimes I found it a bit too much. At one minute the whole clip started shaking which was quite annoying, think you can use it but just very short. At 1:48 you switch to another effect and the same on 3:37 and there my opinion is that you go wrong, it looks like effects have been used just because they look cool but you allways should use them sparingly. Too much in this case gives it a more amateur look while using them well balanced your clip would easily fit between other mtv clips. The vignette was sometimes a bit heavy as well.