Watched the first one. Not funny for me. Boring. Cant see where the editing was, there appeared to be little planning involved, just appeared to be two dudes waffling on filmed by a giggling camera person...
Sorry, just the usual youtube fare, poorly and hurridly executed second rate 'comedy'.
Try writing the piece first, then think about how the camera 'sees' the scene, the camera IS the audience. Use different camera angles and cuts to take the audience closer and create drama.
Everyone makes stuff like this when they get a camera and it is rarely any good, unless the talent is outstanding, and it wasnt....
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