Got it. The slo-mo is overdone a wee bit. But interesting to watch, though. It’s got the makings of a good little piece. How about a few more cutaways, to add interest, and show the surroundings a bit more? I found myself wondering about the venue – what and where is it? Some close-up faces of onlookers would also add some variety to the main theme.

Looking again, you could improve the colour a little, too.