Well - I think you should be very proud of yourselves for making that (the drug deal one). The story was interesting, the shots were clever and it was well paced.

Drama is hard, but all the basics stuff was there and worked for me.

The acting was dire, but the kiddo with black spikey hair was good at tiems, but it still worked as a spoof.

Personally I would have used the old rover (seen briefly) as the get away car. I like the gag at the end, finishes it off nicely.

Some of the shots would have been better on a tripod. Suggest using your camera in manual mode.

Will watch other later. Good stuff, very good.

edit

Just spotted your student status, clearly you have absorded all the stuff taught and put it to good use, it shows, except for the axis crossing in the doorstep conv as pointed out above.

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