I am curious if that background is of the Trojan Nuclear Implosion? If so, I live about 8 miles from that site!

Bluff Titler has some amazing abilities. You might try adding some dead time at the end (extend the film) and fade out to black, allowing better integration into your film. Here is a crude example:

http://s93795793.onlinehome.us/video...h_riskycom.wmv

Here is another neat little fade out into the background picture:

http://s93795793.onlinehome.us/video...underwater.AVI

Yet another crude little short into done for fun and experimentation using some free direct x 3-de models downloaded from the net:

http://s93795793.onlinehome.us/video...n_and_ship.wmv

I like your intro, and instead of music, the explosion seems more apropos.