I like the end where it dissolves. I noticed throughout the text skips a few frames which is not appealing. The thing about it though is the text looks really fake at the start. What I would do is fix the text maybe add a blur around it or make the text darker so it blends nicer. Then when it catches on fire make the fire engulf it more just so it adds that jolt then add a sound where flames make that "Whoof" noise. Then it would be cool. Other than that creative. |