Thanks for the feed back!

I defiantly agree it could have been edited tighter, and my original project was much shorter (almost a min). The entire presentation was supposed to be 45 mins, so I had to increase the duration of many scenes. Another problem I had with the short cuts is with the very few voiceovers’ I had the film was a little to fast for an audience to understand. I ended up playing on a large projector via DVD which looked quite good, and it seem liked the class enjoyed it.