Nice idea. I liked it as a concept for a video and I think you should do more like it.

I dont think the driving fitted at the end and those reaaly interesting close ups need to be steadier and the pans smoother I think to get the best visual effect. It would work longer too.

The close up on the face really got my attention. Music worked.

Nice to see something a bit arty and experimental.

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