Hey everyone,

I've not posted here before because this is the first film I've ever made. I'd really appreciate any opinions you have, good or bad:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3rPGEAQswU

It's on YouTube because it's for a competition and they required I upload it there, so sorry about the quality.

It's a film noir, which I think was rather ambitious as a first project given that:

1. I don't live in a city
2. I don't live in America
3. I'm not American for that matter
4. I had to maintain certain futuristic elements
5. I had to fit it into the continuity of someone else's story
6. I had just one week to make it
7. I had to fit it all into a maximum of 90 seconds
8. I've not actually watched very much film noir
9. I've never done any CGI before
10. I had zero budget

Yeah, so out of my depth

Anyway, I look forward to your comments.