I'm a little in two minds over this one. For the amount of story and information actually given it is a very long piece and I seriously think it can be editted down to about 1/3rd of what it is at least and be better.

What suprises me though, is that as long as it is (and I was conscious of it while watching) I never got even remotely bored with it.

I'm presuming you filmed it all yourself as well. i.e. you never had anyone else to hand. There were a lot of 'static' shots which makes me think no-one was guarding the camera while you were driving by. Some of those car shots needed a little panning i thought.

Also I assumed you were at home at the beginning yet when you got into your car you were in a multi story car park. I had to stoip and think about that for a second and so it might be considered a continuity error?

And lastly, what kit did you use to put the camera on the side of the car? I'm curious.

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