this is interesting. Goog thing you are doing color correction as most of it is very flat. On the whole it works nicley but - the closeup shots don't do anything for her. I felt i was missing the action on these close-ups.
She could have glammed herself up a bit more and done something a lil more exciting with her hair.
I loved the shot where you panned up from her shadow but don't use it a second time. - The ednding shots of the cityscape are nice but irrellevant - would be nicer to see her walk away if the video is about her.
All the cuts were good. Will be great to see a colour corrected version with all the colours really pushed getting rid of the home video flat feel.
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