It doesn't quite represent a videomaker (although it could represent a wanker :lol: :lol: ) and it's way too complicated. Imagine having to use it on a website, or print little stickers with it - how would it look like? The colors should also match perfectly, and the choice of font is very important - there's so much to consider. Keep it simple and ellegant.
You obviously have an eye for high impact visuals. Now all you have to do is think "effectiveness".