Hey I really enjoyed that
To me this is what home movie editing is all about, turning what could be mediocre footage into a worthwhile and enjoyable production you and others can enjoy in years to come.
It seems you understand the shortcomings of your video so I won't dwell on them, but I don't think the shakey cam or some bum shots detracts from the whole fun of the thing, and using one of my fav rock tracks in recent years really helped me to get involved.
Hell, I wanna go there now too