Good tips (and I say that from a reporter's point of view). Keep ellaborating on that, it will be a good instructional video.
Now about the video... it ended kind of abruptly (but this is a work in progress so it's undestandable). The text appeared to me as too fast. Maybe you can leave it longer on screen. And careful about the spelling, too. I'm not a native English speaker but I can distinguish the correct form between "experience" and "expirience".
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