Hey, that was really good, especially if you are new to editing.

I liked the use of the b/w and the way you bring in the sound and colour.

I was interested all the way through, the human angle got me.

Watch out for those tarty wipes, they add little and look cheap. They are easy to add but should be used with extreme caution.

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