to critique the video and not the boarding, maybe a little more up front explaining what is happening, This will get the viewer a little more interested (Hopefully). The camera shots are very blah and distant, but I do like the way you kept score, that was a nice creative touch. This was obviously done really on the spot and not really planned out, (which I am guilty of many times over) but if you took the time to plan out areas of where the tricks can be performed and the camera set up ahead of time on a tripod (or a steady cam might be nice too), with the right editing you can make somthing funny and interesting. As is, this video is more in the "It's funny if you know my friends" category.
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