paintball is a fast action sport, so filming fast with fast cuts is a must, Far too much close action in your clip, maybe add so Slow motion action clips when someone jumps to the floor etc or someone getting hit
A far distant shot to see the whole playing field and to see the Goal of the team.

Brian

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