Hi Ronrosa,
It was probably me that recommended this site to you (from the wetpixel forum?)
Liked your vid. Sound was breaking up a bit on the topside shots at the start.
I know that some species dont like us to get too close but....maybe a few less fully-zoomed shots. They can be quite shaky.
I've just started re editing some old scuba vids for web (from 30 mins mpegs down to less than 5 min long WMVs) as web creates a bigger audience than giving out discs. You'll find them
here
http://media.putfile.com/Shark-feed98
and here
http://media.putfile.com/Jills-birthday-dive
Most recently tried narrating the footage rather than just music. That def helps the audience follow the story.
hope to see more stuff from you.
What camera and housing you using?