Before you read all the things I have to say.....Nice film!
I appreciate that this was 'just thrown together' so these are just some comments that came to mind when I was watching it (three times). Overwhelmingly this is a great bit of footage, well edited. Having said that, it is nice to get feedback that you can do something with so here goes...
Font = yuck!
first 40 seconds is annoying simply because the lack of any audio from the video makes it sound muted.
I guess the music in the first 40 seconds is intended to give it a sense of suspense? I just found it annoying though.
Maybe a narration over the first 40 seconds with some lapping water/ sea sounds in the background. If necessary the 'suspense music' could build once the narration ended.
Once underwater I loved everything about it. NO criticisms
Good job
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