Nice sense of occasion - it’s always good to video fun events. Handheld and fast-paced, it’s stylish, but I think a couple of things let you down.

I feel you could have done more with the available light. It suffers from poor contrast, and muddy colour, which contributes to the 'grainy' effect. It could be greatly improved with contrast & colour balance filters during the edit.

I like the final part - sticking in ‘extra bits’ is a cute little touch. It's enjoyable to watch.