It’s fun viewing, and you all look as if you really want to connect. As you say, it wanders from one topic to another randomly. Not sure if the music suited it, but I agree it’s a great rock number.
I think it needs polishing up a bit. You all had a brief spoken part onscreen, but not much. Maybe some greater detail of at least one of you would add something to the mix. It’s a vid that seems unsure of what it’s doing.
I hope you enjoyed using the kit, I’m sure you’ll all do well with this project, and it's an interesting website. Will we get a glimpse of the final video?
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