Pity about.
Lack of response shots.
Head on camera shot of someone looking 90 degrees sideways off camera, always a little jarring.
Mic/s could have been a little closer to reduce boxiness.
30 years working in television (Drama, News and Documentaries) certainly does not make me an expert, but maybe there's a tip or two in there.
I've just read that back and it sounds awful. I'll still be voting for you.